Thursday, March 30, 2017

Log line for pitching to people

A bookish orphan tumbles through the world of hobo magic, where kooky hobo wizards teach her that a fairytale ending comes to those who roll with the punches.

EDIT: I've found that this pitch works better if it includes a short gameplay description to provide context. I see no way to combine these into a single log line, so I'd recommend just pitching the above sentence with this one: 

"An open world mixture of Zelda: Wind Waker and Mario 64 that customizes the platforming and combat abilities around the equipment selected by the player."








Old version: A responsible and bookish orphan tumbles through a topsy-turvy world of hobo magic, where kooky hobo wizards teach her that a fairytale ending comes to those who roll with the punches.

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